News You Can Bruise for 2005 May 15 (entry 0)

(3) Sun May 15 2005 22:59 PST Things That Are Fun: Writing stuff to fulfil various obligations. It's kind of slow going. My creativity seems to be exhausted for the moment. Thus, this spectacularly dull entry. Anyway, here's a cool picture of a mola mola, and Kris is going to start doing another comic soon.

Comments:

Posted by Kristofer Straub at Mon May 16 2005 23:38

It's not Adam's Pickoveresque hero; his I felt was a lot better than mine.

His is here:
http://www.cs.ucla.edu/~kaplan/literature/constanze_the_philosopher.txt

And mine, since removed from my index, is here:
http://www.nightlightpress.com/fiction/Gravity.htm

Posted by Leonard at Wed May 18 2005 15:42

You should have ripped off Adam's instead of going with yours, then. I thought your two were pretty similar, actually.

Posted by Kristofer Straub at Thu May 19 2005 04:22

Maybe I will have them duke it out to see exactly whose is better!

I think I just liked Adam's reference to the girl's father at the end, "who at this moment is being chased from all establishments of good repute." The phrase stayed with me since I first read it.