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[Comments] (1) Constellation Games Author Commentary #18: "The Amazing Colossal Man-in-the-Middle": Be warned! This week's commentary goes deep into the workings of a scene that was originally a disaster, and the rewrite process that made it hopefully only a minor disappointment. Fortify yourself with last week's Twitter archive before proceeding.

Tune in next week for the shocking chapter 19, in which Ariel travels the well-worn road from "unreliable narrator" to "flat-out liar." The chapter in which BEA Agent Fowler will say the ridiculous line everyone tried to get me to cut, but I refused! For you, my readers.

Image credits: Flickr user windygig, Pepe Medina, Danny Cornelissen.

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Posted by Ben Heaton at Tue Mar 27 2012 15:10

I'm not sure it's my favorite Tetsuo scene, but his attempt at imitating Ariel's writing style is pretty delightful.


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