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Wed Apr 13 2005 10:36 What they did to my manuscript:
However the publisher sees them as big books, so the copy editor went through my chapters (essays) removing the "I" voice because the "I" for this book has multiple personality disorder. I use "I" a whole lot, because my nonfiction writing style is "Hello, allow me to tell you stuff". My "I'll show you x" became "You'll learn to x", and "I think you should do x" became "You should do x". The latter I'm a little uneasy with. It's just, like, my opinion, man.
Speaking of which, the copy editor also took out my Lebowski homage (changing "parlance" to "terminology"), but left "encroaching ennui" and all of my jokes intact. Not a bad trade.